Comments : Spilt wine

  • 9 years ago

    by Nebula

    This is beautiful Mo. I love this -
    "... But you have called to the night
    you have asked that she return the warmth to your belly
    she lies, cold, naked and pocked, a wry smile curling her lips"
    A wonderful image!

  • 9 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I liked this as well - very deep emotions here and very well penned. I think we each have felt the same currents of life as you have written it here. I look forward to more.