Wow. the flow of this is pretty good! and i really like the story it tells. it's desperate..but in a sweet way.

We water down these brief moments of solitude
Staring off into the stars
Staring off into what was us

^ i really liked this, especially since i am looking at the stars out my window right now. it just seemed relatable. i also liked the first line for the vocabulary.

good job

Very very good. i love it:)

Hey, this is a pretty good poem. =] Well, I like it. It flowed pretty well, and the meaning hits a point that almost everyone feels at one point. It was very interesting the way you put things. Well done. =]

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Kaitlyn. _