Every line complex and creative. 5/5.

This left me breathless, so beautiful and different way of writing.
Lovely!
5/5

Wow after reading your latest poem , i desided to read another and your work still amazes me. your poem was true and lots of people (me myself) could relate to exactly what you are feeling/writing about. the work well well writen and the placing of the poem, seemed to make it flow smoothly. the poem was too the point and didn't leave the reader hanging. and great part of the poem was---

And remember when you told me that poetry never erased the lies,
they simply painted over the truth?
Well baby, I can promise you that my walls and heart are covered in red paint,

i got the meaning of the title with this verse. the use of words at this point was great. keep up the amazing work--tara

This is amazing(:
i love it.
in fact a wonderful poem.
keep it up..
<3

.xoxo.
Destiny

Wonderful choice of words. love it. :) i can really relate to your poem.

A fitting poem for 15 year olds in love.