Comments : Midnight storms

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Last line:
    you and i collide
    just a suggestion babe

    other than that it was amazing : ) 5/5 <33

  • 16 years ago

    by jayson salvador

    Very nice. subtle details make the poem more exciting.

  • 16 years ago

    by Pink Romance

    Nicce poem and it ios nice to see you writting again =] thanks for listening boo... read some of my work also kkk..=] 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Oh wow....really...i love it....it's just amazing. i agree with me just you....you and i collide..hmm....anyway!

    When it rains invisible fingers trace every inch of me.

    ^ i really like this line....wonderful. great job babe.

  • 16 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    I love that, when you and I collide... It's an interesting way of interpreting love. Thankyou for your comment.

    Greta x

  • 15 years ago

    by Matt L

    I love that last line it hits you like a slap in the face!

    keep writing

  • 15 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    I really really really really really like this poem, I love how you describe your emotions as if they were a storm...this is definitly one of my favorites. I love it. lol

  • 15 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    I really really really really really like this poem, I love how you describe your emotions as if they were a storm...this is definitly one of my favorites. I love it. lol

  • 15 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Great poem!
    but try using more decriptive words...
    keep up the good work

  • 15 years ago

    by Steven

    I love this poem, great job, is one of a kind, and thanks for the comment.

  • 15 years ago

    by desiring love

    Good poem!

  • 15 years ago

    by Nic

    Hey
    this is realy good
    great job hunn
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Jes Miller

    Hey nice poem...

  • 15 years ago

    by emo angel

    I love the metaphors in this poem!
    well done! =]

  • 14 years ago

    by Stephanie Michelle

    Amazing. Brilliant. Captivating. . . This piece is definitely going into my favourites.

    AMAZING JOB!