Wow tht poem is so touchin, great job. 5/5

Wow!..this was great!!..it had lots of emotion, and like my favorite line was the very last one.
"try to learn a lesson from my death
death of a stranger, or perhaps a friend"

totaly loved it!!!
***aLy***
5/5

This is really sad...
but amazing. :]

5/5

I felt all the emotion, love this poem lots!
sad but well writin!
xox

That was just.. Wow. That was so hauntingly beautiful. It does give you these dark shivers that travel up and down your spine, as if death itself reaches out and touches you through this poem. I was eating food while reading this, and it actually made me put down my food (which btw, NEVER happens) and stare. This just.. it's touching, so sad, but so touching. Amazing job.

A 5/5 seems a shame. I guess I have to settle for it though huh? :)

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

I loved it 5/5
i hope your stil alive

Impressive !

Wow good thing these words don't include hollow points or I'd have one big hole in me. Emotions are drippping here with each line. I like it and look forward to more good writes.

^ ^ I think everyone has pretty much said what I was going to say, just wow... :O
5/5
~FountainsOfBlood

Wow this was an awesom poem... great job i am going to check u out somemore .. later .. great job keep it up

I love this one too!

Omg! this is the best ive read, I loved it....10/5