Comments : On My Own

  • 15 years ago

    by silent screams

    Well written but very sad sweet. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Its short but its good, well done xx

  • 15 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    It was an okay poem, bt I'm a rhyming fan, a usually don't even read non-rhyming pieces, but yours was short, so I did. Even though this piece was short, it had a lot of power and emotion, good work.

    Brad

  • Great job.just remeber that you are not on your own.
    ;) lesthat

  • 15 years ago

    by real eyes realize real lies

    I like this poem and can relate to being alone