Hey,
I liked your poem, the flow was okay..sometimes a bit off, The only thing I didn't liked was that you repeated forever gone a lot of time, maybe you could have used a synonym, like lost, departed, absent. but thats just my opinion. 5/5
kisses stephanie

It looks like it could be a pop stars song. i dunno if thats a good thing or bad. it has some spelling and grammer issues. you should fix them. but besides that its good.

Telling people its not your best is surely a way to set yourself up for defeat.

The poem is good, but it needs a little work in the flow area.

-Syn

That was sad, it shows the hurt that you felt when you thought of this. The tragic story is what makes it good though. The rythm needs a little work, but good other than that. 5/5

Defanitly not one of your best???
i thought that was lovely, a cute little write,
awsome job, 5/5

-mandy :)

Excellent job very sad thanks for your comment on my poem "Just a little girl"

Very good and very powerful.... i liked it very much... I would suggest getting rid of the comment at the top. It may discourage to read this peice of work ( which is very good ) because of it but i liked it... very good
5/5

Awee!! I loved this poem Aly!
Loved the rhythm, the rhyme, and the structure.
Favourite verse is;
"Away from my heart,
Away from my love,
I can't believe you are Forever Gone."
~~ Really ties in with the title and the meaning of them poem.
You may not think it is one of your best pieces, but it is definately not one of your worst ;]
Keep it up <3 Good work <3
5/5
- Nic xx

Plz dont blame yourself for this accident. if it is true.
good poem, keep writing

Oh man i know just how u feel....amazing poem....5/5

This one is very sad!

Aww so sd

verrry cleverr </33

I like this poem......
awesome. u sure write it with feelings!
:) keep writing....... bye bye.......