Awesome piece the last part is my fav.
as far as the contents sounds like a dream
and its funny cause this is the annivesary
of m. l. k. death who is very line is I HAVE
A DREAM WEIRLD HUH?

Wow i loved this...its so honest and i think we should still live this way to..i hate that my parents have to worry about me all the time if we had jesus and paddling back in school the streets might just be clean and safe for us to walk around till mid night or something!! but then again it all changed for a reason right? well great poem((5))