Comments : My lady, she calls me

  • 9 years ago

    by Lu

    It does not matter
    how I find her,
    tranquil or
    roaring with passion.
    I love all her faces.
    ^^^
    Oh Ingrid you have painted such a vivid picture with these words. Though I didn't know till near the end what exactly inspired these words ... upon the re-read the picture became so clear and the visuals it gave me were amazing.

    She embraces me
    with all she's got
    Lifts me up
    and leaves me
    floating
    in complete ecstasy.
    ^^^
    This part leaves the reader with such a feeling of tranquility. Its as though all our trouble float away .... as we feel weighless above the water.
    Beautiful feeling this stanza leaves me with.

    How I love her....
    my lady,
    the sea.
    ^^
    The ending wraps up this piece fantastically.

    You caught my attention from the beginning and held it to the very last words.

    Wonderful read Ingrid! You have left me today with such a beautiful image and a peace filled heart.

    XXX
    Luanne

  • 9 years ago

    by Cindy

    Ingrid
    What a wonderful piece you have penned. The imagery is awesome.

    She embraces me
    with all she's got
    Lifts me up
    and leaves me
    floating
    in complete ecstasy.

    I love these lines. Oh what a wonderful feeling to be floating surrounded by all the waters beauty.

    How I love her....
    my lady,
    the sea

    The ending is perfect. You did a really fantastic job on this.
    Love Cindy

  • 9 years ago

    by Elapsed

    This was a fantastic read!!.. Loved the imagery and emotion expressed within this piece. I totally agree with Cindy the ending was awesome!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I agree with everyone above, good work and nice words that have spilled from the poets pen. Whenever i need to find good poems this section " nature" never fails to deliver. There are alot of good works here. Yours is one of them

  • 9 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Wow...breathtaking and beautiful.... awesome nature metaphors and images...great job Ingrid...my favorite of yours! ~Bravo~

  • 9 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wow, even my vote to this poem for the weekly contest couldnt prove how much i liked it. This one is awesome and so refreshing. So unique and simple...but still too deep. I really like such poems a lot.

    all the best and take care

  • Hmmmm, her memmories is what you have yearn and pine for.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    I am sure I am not alone in being able to find some pleasant ambiguities in the wording here! A very enjoyable read. :-)

  • 9 years ago

    by Fear2love

    Real good poem, u confused me at first but now u get it

  • 9 years ago

    by Dixiedaisy

    Ingrid,
    Such an eloquent way of relating your love of the sea. It is very evident in the readers eye that the sea heals you. It is your life's muse. Fantastic job dear.
    Love,
    Kay

  • 9 years ago

    by John Long

    This could be a poem about unconditional love, the only true kind. Do you love her when she is cold?

  • 9 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    My favorite of your poems. Excellent imagery and flow in this awesome free verse. Eloquently penned. Great job!!!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Dear Ingrid

    this is so beautifully done. I am just back from a holiday by the sea and it inspired me enough to get back to writing. Now, reading your verse tells me how similar our love for this beautiful creation is!
    well done

    love and luck
    shobhana

  • 9 years ago

    by Danny Bloom

    I really love the imagery you use and the personification. In the beginning i thought you were talking about a person then it all made sense. It proves that love isn't only for a person, we can actually have a passion for anything. Very inspiring. Great write 5/5

    Btw, I would love to see a writing like this if you used imagery that described a person, but surprised the reader at the end with the concluding statements of your concluding statement:

    How I love her....
    my lady,
    the sea.

    I think that would be a possible variation that you might look into. It would be a good writing technique. Just a suggestion though! I always try to throw one in, but this time i really have to dig because i love it so much! haha.

  • 9 years ago

    by Corinne

    Very nice indeed. I wasn't expecting that ending :-)

  • 9 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    The beginning was surprising but the end was astounding.. not many would expect it, and you did very well penning it. :) Take care! Bri~ 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    Beautifully penned piece. Not many people can write like this, and you mastered that quality wonderfully... most people don't have a wide imagination or the ability to use certain words.. but you can, considering. :) I loved reading this, Ingrid; it is a very outstandingly-written poem and more. Take care!

    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    Haha, I commented thrice.. I guess you did get it! Take care, anyway..

  • 9 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    It does not matter
    how I find her,
    tranquil or
    roaring with passion.
    ^^ah very very good descriptive words that that painted a picture for me
    great job!
    5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    A Serene and Lovely Write, Kudos!!!