Wow nice fist poem that you put on here really liked it hope to see more of your work=)

Thank you! Hopefully there will be many more

Awh way cute, great job.

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Very sweet...Sounds like everything my fiance' said to me before we started dating! AWWWW...so sweet! keep it up, your very talented!!! :) Jenna Bignell

Small ryme issue but otherwise very cute and good. =]

Great poem it expresses alot , and its from a guys point of view wich is nice. because normally its frm a girls like "o.m.g he didnt see me standing there is he blind i'm gunna go tell my friends ." something stupid like that.anyways good poem

This is really sweet.
nice poem ... how long have you been writting

I give it a 5/5!! Loved it!!!

Uh-wow.I never read a love poem that ended with a reference to a food-lol-but it was a good poem.I saw some simple mistakes like writting 'to' instead of 'too'.Plus, you should always capitalize your 'I' and add apostrophizes.

"So many words that
got left unspoken
i wanna be the one that
dont leave your heart broken"

-here I think that you should change 'dont' to 'won't'

great poem though.

---amber---

DATz CRAZy!
iTz LyK yUR WRiTiNG EBERyTHiNG MA BOyFRiENd WAS FEELiNG B4 WE GOT TEWGETHER.
ii REALLy LyKEd DiZ ONE ALOT!
dA ONLy THiNG ii WOULd CHANGE iS AT dA BEGiNNiNG yU SPELLEd ATTENTiON WRONG.
BUT ONCE AGAiN 5/5

Omg!!! this is so good... its rly cute... and i like all ur poems i just like this one alot...lol
keep it up

xoxox
Britt