24 hrs

by JAZMIN   Mar 31, 2008


It took 24hrs to change it all.
It took 24hrs for everything to fall apart.

I never saw it coming
but 24hrs is all it took for this to end.

The night before I was telling you
how much I loved you.
The night after I was telling you
how much I was going to miss you.

I sit and think where it all went wrong?
I sit and think did 24hrs really take to change it all?

I didn't 24hrs would be long enough to change what you feel?
I didn't know 24 hrs would be enough for you to think
that with me you don't longer want to be with.

Just remember that it wont take me 24hrs to change this love.
It wont take 24hrs to forget the pain that you caused.

It took him 24hrs to end it all.
It took him 24hrs to tear my world down.
I took him 24hrs to let me fall.

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  • 14 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    Loved it
    damn 24hrs!!!
    great

  • 15 years ago

    by silent turbulence

    *speechless*

  • 15 years ago

    by JAZMIN

    I know...doesnt it suck...
    The guy i wrote this for... is now with someone else... and it breaks my heart because it wasnt even a month later that he got with her after we broke up... i still love him, no 1 knows that...

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Wow, this is definitely make sense and you tok all the words in me to feel like "damn, that is what ive been trying to say some simple things" 24hours are just like that and really perfect for this!!! keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I like this poem alot. The way you have used '24hrs' to really hit home the absolute shock of a loved one leaving!!

    Well done 5/5

    Michael