Great poem xxx

Very very very nice lol......great poem but 24hrs can change a lot lol

Wow this poem is so sad and is really good.=)

I like this poem alot. The way you have used '24hrs' to really hit home the absolute shock of a loved one leaving!!

Well done 5/5

Michael

Wow, this is definitely make sense and you tok all the words in me to feel like "damn, that is what ive been trying to say some simple things" 24hours are just like that and really perfect for this!!! keep it up!

I know...doesnt it suck...
The guy i wrote this for... is now with someone else... and it breaks my heart because it wasnt even a month later that he got with her after we broke up... i still love him, no 1 knows that...

*speechless*

Loved it
damn 24hrs!!!
great