Fallen and Immortal

by ..::Angel of your darkness::..   May 23, 2004


Every day like the last
My world, my life, all so vast
The fallen angels they hear my cry
Then come from below they come to thy

My life, my dreams have faded away
I have to live this torture over again everyday
Never dying, never sleeping
Always crying, always weeping

There are no answers to my life
It's all just one big strife
No escape, no way out
No one can hear my cry, my shout

Save me from my everlasting nightmare
for this thing i'm living is not fair
I've had to watch my friends and family die
I've seen eternal darkness grow in the sky

My heart pounds and my body shakes
Watching the world live and learn by its mistakes
Why did I fall into this hell?
I made it to heaven, but then I fell

Now As the many nights go by
The more I cry, knowing I can never die
When the end comes I will be forever alone
As I watch the world turn to stone

In this broken lonely world I will stay
Having to live every painful day
Forever alone, forever here
Immortality, my greatest fear

Just a note to say although this is on the top rated, check the date, this was one of the very first poems i wrote on this site a few years ago so as some of you have mentioned there's problems with it, well it was when i was alot younger so if you like check out some of my new poems, they have improved over time

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  • 10 years ago

    by TinkER BeLL

    I love this poems. the flow is great and in most long poems i kind of get lost, but this one kept my attintion. Keep it up. it great. :-)

  • 10 years ago

    by For The Heart I Once Had

    Overall it was a great poem with good flow and lots of emotion!

    Keep it up :) :)

    MemberOfTheBlackParade x

  • 10 years ago

    by SuicidalHaze

    Now As the many nights go by
    The more I cry, knowing I can never die
    When the end comes I will be forever alone
    As I watch the world turn to stone

    i just cant get over this part of your poem because it seems as though this is the way i feel anyways... but good job on this one i can really relate to it

  • 10 years ago

    by SuicidalHaze

    Now As the many nights go by
    The more I cry, knowing I can never die
    When the end comes I will be forever alone
    As I watch the world turn to stone

    i just cant get over this part of your poem because it seems as though this is the way i feel anyways... but good job on this one i can really relate to it

  • 10 years ago

    by Iain Mackay

    I really like this poem. Nice work on it! =]

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