Comments : Fallen and Immortal

  • 13 years ago

    by ashleigh

    i love this poem it touched my heart and i hope u keep up the good work

  • 13 years ago

    by Nikki

    I absolutely loved your poem. I myself am only 15 and I have only submitted 1 poem. I can't wait to read more of your poems.

  • 12 years ago

    by Georgi

    love it especially the last stanza x

  • 12 years ago

    by Robert

    this was done very well but some words wer abit out of point but read ok. Still a very good one I got a poem called Countess Of Blood and another called howling desert tell me what you think will you

  • 12 years ago

    by Dangerous Angels

    well, not your best work but it's still good. Still heart felt. And I'm sure this is an older one so I'm know u've gotten much better.

    †Dani†

  • 12 years ago

    by Elynnka

    I think it was a very good poem. I especially liked this part "I've had to watch my friends and family die / I've see eternal darkness grow in the sky" I know how it is:(
    Keep writing and stay strong *hugs*

    ~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

  • 11 years ago

    by Elynnka

    Very beautiful poem! One thing though:
    "Why did I fall into this hell?
    I made it to heaven, but then I feel"
    I think you meant "fell" right? *wonders* except for that, it was a real pleasure to read. Keep up the writing! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Jayden Mackwell

    I think this one is really great. It's so deep and meaningful. I can really relate to it too.

  • 10 years ago

    by Elynnka

    That was an awesome poem!
    Very emotional and I really liked the storyline! Is it about a vampire? =)
    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Yuna

    I loved reading this poem. The verses just flowed together, and created a very well-done poem. THank-you. I hope to read more of your work!

  • It was Pretty Good 4/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Lilly

    Wow that is amazing!

  • 10 years ago

    by Alison

    This is really good! =] 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Boy

    I realy loved your poem. such a sad feelings. and the pain behind the words. excellent image. gr8 wrk 5/5

  • I really loved this poem and this is the first time i have read your poem and i can say that i will be reading more, this is beautiful..very heartfelt and touching but i hope that is not what you feel and is going though, i can't help but take every poem serious..
    wish you all the best
    keep the great work up...

  • 10 years ago

    by Moon Princess

    Hey the flow and structure is done very good, and I love all the description. Your an amazing poet and I really enjoyed this piece.
    xx Another Crystal Tear Falls xx

  • 10 years ago

    by *~Broken_Seraph~*

    I LOVE THIS POEM! not many people can pull off AABB Format but you did it so beatuifully! i have a few similar poems as well.

  • 10 years ago

    by dan15

    Ur poem was good over all...i liked it..... emotional..

  • 10 years ago

    by Alissa

    This was a very good poem over all, it struggled at some points with the flow, but all in all it was fantastic. Very emotional!! :):)
    Great jub, keep it up!!

    Your friend:)
    Alissa

  • 10 years ago

    by broken wings

    Ur a good writer and it shows that ur a deep thinker as well. this is one the best poems i've read in a while.