Looks Aren't Everything

by Justin   Apr 1, 2008


She's as soft as cotton
but you stick to her like glue
Her eyes could never be forgotten
With that wonderful shade of blue

She smells like a fresh rose
with looks that could kill
and whenver you see her your mind is froze
and for a moment your thoughts are tranquil

It's not just her personality
that makes you want her more
but her own individuality
that makes you want to adore

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  • 9 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    I like how ac rhyme and how ad rhyme I just love it's too adorable plus it made me smile lol I like how you describe her but I'm sure it's about a person or for me it's a pretty rabbit I don't know what's wrong with me I think it's the fact I'm leaving PQ and I'm just thinking weirdly anyways I just adorded this poem it's too cute for words I can't even describe how adorable this is I'm sure this is by far the cuttest love poem I've ever read (and I just don't like romance poems unless they are sad) so thank you for making an adorable poem take care! 5/5

    -Mori

  • 15 years ago

    by Annaam

    Greta poem!! Soo truee... And xactly how it should be.. :)

    'It's not just her personality
    that makes you want her more
    but her own individuality
    that makes you want to adore'
    -- The best one indeed! 8)

    5/5.

  • 15 years ago

    by Teria

    In the last stanza I think you should have it end with "more" and the second line be " adore".

    Other than that you've got a wonderful, amazing poem. I absolutely loved it. Such great meaning and beauty to it.

    Keep it up!

  • 15 years ago

    by BreathesToBleed

    Omg you are so cute with your rightin

  • 16 years ago

    by SoUrNameIsTia

    Thank You! Jeez! i wrote a poem thats called 'only for looks' i like the oppesite better.

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