Comments : There was a Boy who Loved a Girl..

  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Ohhhh, love the ending very suspenseful.

    great work keep this up xxx

  • 9 years ago

    by StuPiD FrEaK

    Thanks!! =]

  • 9 years ago

    by Justin

    Wow VERY GOOD... as Pink said loved the ending really did keep me in suspense wondering what the tragedy was.... good choice of words to.. Fav part was the ending...

  • 9 years ago

    by StuPiD FrEaK

    Hmm.. The tradegy was.. the girl died.. She was waiting for the time the guy would confess but it was too late because she was about to die.. Nyahaha.. I really love tragic stories!!

  • 9 years ago

    by L0V3 Mi fAMilY

    This poem absolutely amazing!
    It had so much emotuin in it!
    Very sad poem.
    My girl went through somethin like this w/ herdf ex, but her ex got killed.
    Good poem!
    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Inuhanyo

    Aww D: Poor guy <3 I know the feeling :( I liked this poem it brings back a few close held memorys that mean the world to me ^_^ I liked it.

  • 9 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    This is freakin AMAZING.... i love it... wow this poem was amazingly captivating... i had to read it more than once... 5/5