Comments : Pain And Confusion

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    A very eye-catching poem. At the start, it detained so much pain.

    Maybe someday my dreams will come true.
    And maybe that day i will finally have you.

    *This final stanza was overwhelming! Very enchanting as well!

    Keep writing! [5.5]

    Best wishes,

    Sarah

  • 16 years ago

    by Hear You Me

    When i know im falling for you! such a simple line but i luurrve it

  • 16 years ago

    by F0revEr HiiSz

    I love this poem.
    its amazingg =]