Comments : This Is All Metaphorical Though ;

  • 15 years ago

    by alive in death

    This sounds like it should be in cyber love section...
    but i admit, this definitly amazed me with it's cleverness... wickedly ironic write!

  • 15 years ago

    by Blissful

    WOW Amber this was amazing and so clever! I would never thing to describe your situation with a computed but I just loved the connections you made and everything was so clear that anbody who reads it would understand. Your last line just blew me away because it tied everything in the piece together flawlessly. The theme was just so modern and so much of a joy to read. Oh my I am still in amazement. You always find different ways to express yourself and it always fascinates me.

    This has to be one of my faves by you which says a lot because each and every one of your poems leave me in awe.

    Well done *5/5*