Waw , its realy good and happy birthday,its hurt when people you love forgot your birth day, i feel that before, i cryed and feel angry,but everyone say sorry but i dont need that sorry but i only need to feel them happy for me and chare that day,i love your poem alot and its full of deep feeling and nicely flow well done 5/5

Awwwww...Very sweet poem......well belated happy birthday....sweet poem..to the point and showed the kind of feeling you might have gone through.....Enjoy life!
well keep writing..
Pooja

Awww, i like it xxx

Great poem!! emotionaly deep.

I am so sorry that is really sad I wish I could help you out.

Written well. It reminds me of my last birthday. Everyone was to busy to care.. 5/5

Aww...things in life are so screwed up and when its your own parents who forget your birthday is when you forget about them.....cause how could they do that..not remember the best day of someones life, the day they came into this world! well hey happy late birthday!!!!=)
im sorry this had to happen to you!?!?!?!=)

K so i' m reading this and it gave me chills becuz my bday is on march 25..and my parents forgot about my birthday as well. well done..i feel for u!

This poem of course reflects much disappointment. Though I cannot recall it ever happen to me I can imagine the anger that may follow. That was reflected by your ending, I believe

I missed a birthday for a different reason

I like the emotion of this one. tell me what you think of my writings too, i too think the best writings are about real things

Lol, I was never one for birthdays when it comes to my own, and I'm so forgetful, but that's why I ask everybody to remind me of other birthdays including my own. My mom is in charge of my sisters and brothers. My brothers and sisters remind me of mom's and dad's birthday and their own spouses and children. The only birthdays I never forget is my wife's, my mother-in-laws and my kids. I'm forgetful, but I rather enjoy life occasionally and would not want to make a mistake that can so easily cost me my life. Great read, and helps really push to not ever make such a mistake because I can see how it can really hurt.

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_this is really sad. Well, belated happy b-day. I enjoyed reading it and i really feel the emotions.. Good work!