I thought it was great. The consistency of the rhymes was flawless and the title was intriguing. You used the commas nicely, compared to the people that seem to scatter them all over the place, not knowing their purpose. In the end, great poem, bravo, and a five from me.
Unfortunately our fears are often realized,you create a mood in your writes almost like a melancholy acceptance of sadness. you lead the reader through a sad story with your imagery.Your rhymes are perfect.