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  • 16 years ago

    by Heimerschmidt

    Its a nice start to a poem, but it is very very very very short.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jackie

    It's a short poem, still good though, 5/5

  • Cute i loved it cery cery sweet. iloved it:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    Hmm..i think it could use some work. its too short and well, i think it needs more emotion and make it longer..its sweet an all but i would love to c this longer. ;)
    Aly

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A cute write... :) Yes, you could expand on it more, Lol. but it's still good.

    All the best,
    Olwin.