This poem comes right from the heart and it has a very sicere feel about it.
It is ever so hard to let go of love when it is over....
Great job!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Very nice romantic free verse that flows smoothe from the heart

Well done

Ouch..Beautifully done that comes from the heart although its more on sadness. I was touched and felt your words which means you wrote it amazingly. Excellent piece and Take Care xDD

Aw. This is sad. I liked it, though. I felt like it was full of emotion, which is good. It also seemed really heartfelt, which is, again, good. I liked the words. However; the fourth line in the first stanza -- "your" should be "you're". :]

5/5

-Briana