Comments : Now You're Gone

  • 9 years ago

    by Lizaveta

    I don't know why it just brought me to tears!
    i can relate to the situation, and the poem is written brilliantly.
    especially the memories you write abiut, and how you then tell it like a story

    very heart-felt, very touching

    5/5
    and i'll add it to my favs

  • 9 years ago

    by jojo

    Wow, you have a natural talent good job!

  • 9 years ago

    by Midnight

    It's an amazing poem. I can relate to it in so many ways. It was written beautifully. Defiantely had to be from the heart. I can't see a flaw in it at all. It's long, but I love long poems. Great job. Keep up the great work.

  • 9 years ago

    by EmOToMbOy13

    Wow...it is sad but it very beautiful, I like it!
    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by leica

    It make's me feel sad, even though i don't fell it yet! its beautiful!

  • 9 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    First off, this is truly touching, heartfelt write. I deeply enjoyed in the whole piece. Usually, I don't like to read friendship poems but this one is great. You pulled me in with interesting first stanza and kept my attention with fantastic descriptions and good rhythm. I like your rhymes because they helped to create such flawless and captivating flow of the whole piece. You put a lot of emotions into this, and they simply flow through each line. I like the fact that not one part of this poem, despite the length, seem forced. You created amazing, so vivid imagery that took me on the poetical journey while your poem unraveled. Overall, this is truly enjoyable, great read.
    Keep writing!

  • 9 years ago

    by Alexis

    Beautiful.

    Amazing...

    what else can I say??

    Great job :]