I don't like rap music at all, but I would've loved to hear a beat with this. It's ver emotional for a rap piece.
Sorry this comment isn't going to be "helpful" or long, but I didn't find anything wrong with this.
"rid your heart, of hate
wise up, get it straight"
^ my favorite part.
This seems to give hope. Like someone reading this could finally realize that they can start over, that they don't need to feel the bad way that they do.
And I like that. =)
This was the part that really stuck out to me.. it is so true and is so much like me right now.. growing up everything seems so innocent and the world you meet is so crazy and wild.. you did an amazing job with this and i love it.. i love rap music too so it is muy perfecto for me!