The Anamil i see is me

by BrOkEn HeArT   Apr 7, 2008


When i look at myself
I am disgusted by what i see
Who is this beast
It looks so sad
It looks like it could just die
Why not help this creature
Take its pain away
So i go for the gun
I shoot the animal right in the heart
I hear a voice from behind me
When i turn i see your beautiful face
You look so sad...
I think to myself "why is he sad i just killed the beast"
I fall to the ground and i look all around
It hurts to breath or even move
You run to my side and asked me
"Why...why now...oh why you"
All i can do is smile at you
I close my eyes as i feel the warm blood seeping down my body now
The last thing i hear before i go is your beautiful voice say
"I love you!"

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  • 15 years ago

    by Nobody

    OMG you are sooooo amazing girl i remember when you showed me this i was sooo amazed (still am) i envy you why cant i write like that? oh well lol well anyways it was truly beautiful and i could defently feel the emotion loved it
    xxxx <33 5/5
    love jaidy

  • I loved it but Iv know you aint a beast Your prolly are beautiful.

    <,,xQuentinX,,>

  • 16 years ago

    by emiley

    Wow! deep i like it alot! good job girly! xoxox keep it up cant wait to read more!