Im speechless...
This was incredible... The content was so... so... passionate. The sorrow, the feeling of giving up, that nothing else mattered was overwhelming...

This truly was an excellent piece, 5/5

--Elaine

Great poem it could feel wat u were feeling

Amazin x x

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Amazing. I'm speechless. That was a truely amazing piece.

I don't know what more to say.

Your good hun. wow and u made me tear up thats hard to do for this "bi" :] lol and good job hun keep up the good work

<3 always,
emily

I really liked this poem!... It's probably one of the best I've read in a while...

You know your poems are one of the best i had EVER read, and to be honest i think there better than emily d.i.c.kison...

Wow..I love this poem. It was great. You should really keep this up, you've got great talent :]

~XXxLostWithoutYouXxx a.k.a Cynda~

This power you behold now,
Is one drenched in sorrow,
With one soft simple push,
You could demolish my tomorrow.

Suicide they'll consider,
Homicide sounds more mature,
Manslaughter I doubt you'd pull off,
You want a bloodbath on the floor,

bestttt part. ever.
i told you that poets have to have a way with words because they have to pick the right one. and you have the most wonderful way with words. its amazing. i loved the whole thing.

<3

Wow this is a reall great poem I loved it

This is a really great poem i loved it

I fricking love this. im adding you to my favourites. this was one of the best poems ive ever read. love the topic youve chosen, its beautiful, the way you pulled love and torture together like that.

--TheGothicAlbino