Pitter Patter

I let my mum read this, she said that soon as i go off this is exactly how she will feel and she said that you have got it down to a t, and not to change a word off it :)

i love the pitter patter thing i always think its such a cute pharse.
i think you could make it longer, expand it it would definitly be worth the read.
its a pretty poem, a sad one but a true one which many mothers throughout the world will share in.

This is my favorite p oem of the day. Absolutely. So much truth to it. And, it's almost beautiful to see imagine the children and so on. Even the nightmare part makes me smile >_<

Great job

Remniscences of childhood are so sweet that one always feels nostalgic about them. You have so beautifully captured then in this poem. I am reminded of lines from Wordswoth:
THERE was a time when meadow, grove, and stream,
The earth, and every common sight,
To me did seem
Apparell'd in celestial light,
The glory and the freshness of a dream.
It is not now as it hath been of yore;—
Turn wheresoe'er I may,
By night or day,
The things which I have seen I now can see no more.

The rainbow comes and goes,
And lovely is the rose;
The moon doth with delight
Look round her when the heavens are bare;
Waters on a starry night
Are beautiful and fair;
The sunshine is a glorious birth;
But yet I know, where'er I go,
That there hath pass'd away a glory from the earth.

This was an amazing poem, it grasped all my attention and thought, keep up the amazing writting :)

Sherry,my dear what an amazing write.Every mother can relate with this piece of work.5/5.Congrats for amongst the top rated poems.