Comments : Would you play my game of death?

  • 9 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Great job girly!
    5/5 amazing flow nice rhyme i loved it
    even if it was about death lol
    i nominated it for this weeks contest! : )

  • 9 years ago

    by Lacie

    Wow thanks a million that one took me a while, but still thnk you very much.

  • 9 years ago

    by ele may

    Really good poem lacie i love it im gona look at ur other poems to.

  • 9 years ago

    by Lacie

    Awsome thanks!

  • 9 years ago

    by Lacie

    Thanks a mill appreciate it! :)!

  • 9 years ago

    by mike

    Wow baby u write great poems

  • 9 years ago

    by Lacie

    W/e!

  • 9 years ago

    by Texastar

    Beautifully written!! be careful tho if ur weak and u read this.....muahahaha.
    anyways great poem Lacie
    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Lacie

    Thanks a million it means alot :D

  • 9 years ago

    by Lacie

    I did it good and thanks for looking at mine :D

  • 9 years ago

    by Fallen Hero

    This flows well, sounds good to me, so far ur my favorite writer on this site.

  • 9 years ago

    by TotaMariee

    Awsome poem! i loved it so much! its flows really well and i love the phyming in it
    5/5

    [[Much] [L]ove
    xx

  • 9 years ago

    by Lacie

    Omg thank you guys and thanks alot josh it means alot to be someones favorite! :D

  • 9 years ago

    by Lacie

    Really? thanks a million that one took me awhile to write, thanks i like that u think so highly of it. appreciate it.

  • 9 years ago

    by C P Sharma

    Technically an excellent poem.5/5
    But a dangerous and negative game to play. Death cannot substitute life. Thematically, I beg to disagree with this game. Anyways, I salute your poetic talent.

  • 9 years ago

    by Lacie

    Ok big words what fun ok thanks friend appreciate it,

    [~lacie~]

  • 9 years ago

    by ele may

    Scary

  • 9 years ago

    by Lacie

    Lol

  • 9 years ago

    by ele may

    I really cant stop reading this poem! its so cool! can u write another one like it?

  • 9 years ago

    by Lacie

    Depends anyone got an topics a can write about?