Comments : Sorry but I have to correct myself

  • 9 years ago

    by Dance Girlie

    Wow. That had a very unexpected ending. I really liked it though. Started off cute, but then got sad.

  • 9 years ago

    by Rose

    Wow, it has a ...nice twist. I really like the last line. Keep it up.

  • 9 years ago

    by Love is a Beautiful Thing

    I can totally relate to this is almost the exact thing that happened to me 5/5 you're great at this!!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Evee Taylor

    Very good Frank, emotions I have felt too, except the ending lol!!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by thesuffocationinsafety

    I can really relate to this in a way; fantastic job =) 5/5 from me