Wow. That had a very unexpected ending. I really liked it though. Started off cute, but then got sad.

Wow, it has a ...nice twist. I really like the last line. Keep it up.

I can totally relate to this is almost the exact thing that happened to me 5/5 you're great at this!!!!

Very good Frank, emotions I have felt too, except the ending lol!!!!

I can really relate to this in a way; fantastic job =) 5/5 from me