Comments : Fallen Angel

  • 16 years ago

    by Asher

    It sends a strong message

    I like it! 5

  • Wow i love the flow of this poem!! keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by BurriedFaceDown

    A very questioning poem. it leaves some questions unanswered. But i love the wording of the poem.

    The souls he still loves and adores.
    The pigs, the sinners, and the ones he loved more.
    You will take them all and feel no remorse.
    Now seen riding a dead pale white horse.
    He may rule the skies, but you'll rule the Earth.
    You will show him all that you are still worth