It's Just A Mask

by Diva the Chiropteran Queen and a Brokencyde and a Twilight Fan   Apr 14, 2008


Time goes by slowly
People near me can't see me in pain
I lie to hide the pain
They'll never understand.

It's just a mask
Yet no one can see through it
Everything is just an act.
But how can they tell?

It's just a mask
Can they tell
That I'm not well?
No one can, no one but me.

I'ts just a mask
It hides the pain and hurt,
Only showing happiness.
They're just oblivious to the tears.

It's just a mask
That hides a little girl in pain
Crying and screaming
They can't hear it over my laughter

It's just a mask
That keep everybody fooled
They've played the game
That i can't

That game...is known as love...

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Yeah i made this really quick when i was very depressed...not one of my best though..oh well..

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  • 16 years ago

    by aislynn

    Wow i really like how it was written.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenna Rose Kat

    Hmm very interesting.
    I like it but Im not sure about the very last line. It jsut sounds like youre trying to force it or something.
    Overall I really like it :) I fel the same way alot of times

  • 16 years ago

    by Diva the Chiropteran Queen and a Brokencyde and a Twilight Fan

    Thanks guys...i'm gonna work on it and repost it when i get a chance

  • 16 years ago

    by unknown

    It's nice,,, just didn't flow well.. It has a strong emotion, especially the few last stanzas... I'm sure it's because you wrote it when you were depressed..
    Take it easy, gurl..

  • 16 years ago

    by abullettotheheart

    I feel well the same
    i can be crying in the middle of the hall while every one is passing by and no one even notices
    i guess its because i was not really crying i was laughing
    but he had walked by and i had to fake a smile but really i wish i would of started crying hard and uncontrolable so that maybe he would acually turn around and look at me
    instead of walking away

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