Let the Rain Wash Away Your Purity

by Yazdan   Apr 16, 2008


The rain is falling heavily
Each drop descending from the heavens
Washing away all joy
all hope
all love
Everything...
Feel the tears of clouds
Cleanse you of all your purity
Erode away your future
And extinguish your once bright light
As you feel the drops form around your skin
and dance across your flesh like devils
Feel trapped
alone
afraid
lost...
Look up into the infinite sky
And realize how minuscule you are
Gaze upon the vastness
Of the destructive falling ocean
Let your tears and rain become one
And fall like every other worthless drop
Let it drench your sight
Your hearing
Your emotions
Your life...
Ignore the footsteps that approach
Splashing water with every heavy footstep
Feel alone as you feel their presence
Wonder when they too, will wash away
Turn to look them in the eyes
And find they have averted theirs
And are staring into the cruel heavens
Which has soaked you
Trapped you
Binded you
Tortured you...
Watch them take their jacket off
And drape it over your heavy shoulders
And feel the weight disappear
Feel the coldness turn to warmth
Feel his now soaked arms around you
And feel flesh instead of rain
Stand there motionless
As he holds you
Shields you
Warms you
Loves you...

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  • 14 years ago

    by KJ

    Beautifully written. Your choice of vocabulary was that of perfection. Also, I love how it was so long, yet I didnt get bored reading it. Even though there was no rhyme scheme, it had amazing flow. Great job. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Baine Willows

    This was absolutely...entrancing. I could feel the rain, and I could feel those arms. I hope I find that I might feel more with your work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Dying Beautifully

    WOW this is amazing I loved it thank you for writting this because it was incomparable to anything anyone could ever write.. I swear you amaze me.. Thank you for writting Yaz:D:D

    Beck

  • 16 years ago

    by Sammerz

    Omgish this is so wonderfully fantastic
    Loved it
    5/5
    Lovely Absolutely Amazing Job!!!