Omgish this is so wonderfully fantastic
Loved it
5/5
Lovely Absolutely Amazing Job!!!

WOW this is amazing I loved it thank you for writting this because it was incomparable to anything anyone could ever write.. I swear you amaze me.. Thank you for writting Yaz:D:D

Beck

This was absolutely...entrancing. I could feel the rain, and I could feel those arms. I hope I find that I might feel more with your work.

Beautifully written. Your choice of vocabulary was that of perfection. Also, I love how it was so long, yet I didnt get bored reading it. Even though there was no rhyme scheme, it had amazing flow. Great job. 5/5