Comments : Looking to the Future

  • 16 years ago

    by Samantha

    Very sweet and honest. Some of your rhymes are a little bit simple but the meaning and thought behind the poem is so strong that the good outweighs the bad.

  • 15 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    Wow!! great poem, i can really relate to it and that may sound strange coz i am young but i am thinking the same thing right now!!
    haha well done 5/5 for me!!
    keep writing!! :)