Wow...
I truly love this write from the beginning to the end. This is one of the most original poem from 'sadness and depression' category I've read in a while. Whole piece is very refreshing and I like your writing style- you have a way with words. This poem is creative and I like its narrative tone. Also, the imagery that you portrayed is excellent, very vivid. I could clearly picture every stanza unfolding in front of my eyes. I like the sarcasm within this poem because the sarcastic tone of some lines added great effect to this greatly written piece.
The only thing that I didn't like is the punctuation in some places, I think that it should be revised but other than that, this poem is amazing. The title is very captivating, too, it caught my attention and this is even better than I expected.
Keep writing!
5/5 from me (and I'm sorry i can't rate it higher lol)

I get it completely. it has many different meanings whether u meant it to or not.

Very very good
i loved the wording and flow : )
good message to i love the analogy of endings not meaning its done
5/5 <33

Nicely done similar to my style i dig it

Wow...that was super good......i got the message...=P.....5/5

Thank you for writing this,
thats all i have to say

This is a great poem..you have a lot to say

Intoxicating :) brought tears to my eyes :)

Pure magic, nothing more can be said that will do this justice.

This is really great poem! Refreshing...nice work. Keep it up! ;)

First of all title is great, it is truly eye-catching and original.

-Hide-and-seek hearts
have a mind of their own
playing childish games
hopscotch and telephone-

^Very direct opening lines, they amazed me, each line posses so much creativity and interesting descriptions.

-Days when we were younger
shooting the cool breeze
back before my heart got this way
back before the rain-filled freeze-

^This is very refreshing, I admire the compact construction of this picture, you said so much with little words.

-Skipping down the lane
friends, arm in arm
but friends are blind, don't you see?
blinded by my witty charm-

^Another incredible stanza, it is so detail and it kept my attention with each word, third line have such powerful twist.

-Reader, did you forget?
how The End doesn't mean it's done
just means it was a happy pause
with heroes riding into the sun-

^Simply breathtaking lines, I really can feel so much emotions in them and you expressed your message here on great way.

-Oops, did I just ruin it?
Did I tell you fairies aren't real?
perhaps another shattered innocence
tell me, how does that make you feel.-

^Here this is a tone of depression which added even more effect to the whole atmosphere, you wrote this without metaphors and it is still pure mix of great poetic beauty and great sadness.

-Hope you aren't devestated
when I tell you the things you used to play
were only the stuff of dreams
and makebelieve always goes away-

^devestated should be devastated
Anyway quite impressive write, it holds so much sorrow and you truly wrote it with amazing originality.

-So open your eyes, Reader
and watch your innocence tear away
and now reality fills that void
and, honey, it's here to stay -

^Usually word -honey- in poem truly truly make me to hate whole piece cause I dislike that word here you fascinated me! So beautiful ending, it is so remarkable and you left very impressionable impression on me, I absolutely love it, you did excellent job with expressing emotions through narrative rhythm and each word is on the perfect place.

Overall I admire your style of writing, subject of this piece is so different from most poems which I read and I think that you wrote whole poem fantastically. This really deserves contest nomination, bravo!

OMG ! ur on the home page!!!!!!
This is so AMAZING!!!
10/5!!!

I loved this poem because it is true.

we dont live in a land of make belioeve
we live in reality.

thats why i like your poem because you are saying it like it is.

the title was exellent to because it caught my eye on the first glance.

Very Original

Lovely <3

I really liked it, the rhyme scheme was great.

WOW this is great, kinda sad but wierd enough puts made me chuckle... i absolutly loved your ending

Oops, did I just ruin it?
Did I tell you fairies aren't real?
perhaps another shattered innocence
tell me, how does that make you feel...

Hope you aren't devastated
when I tell you the things you used to play
were only the stuff of dreams
and makebelieve always goes away

So open your eyes, Reader
and watch your innocence tear away
and now reality fills that void
and, honey, it's here to stay

hehe the 1st stanza i have here is amazing, sad, and indearing, but still kinda humerous the way you worded it great job... 5/5