A nice comparitive to the puppet strings poem. If you will the other side of the coin. Day follows night and night follows day. In another respect it might be looked at that this poem could be guided by the other. Very thought provoking. I liked it.
I just loved how you began and ended this poem. The beginning caught my eye and made me want to read more and the ending just left me with a bang. The message behind it was clear and one I am sure many can relate with and the style you wrote in was simple yet held an immense amount of power and meaning. It might have been short of my liking but you pack a whole lot in your short stanza .. well done *5/5*