Comments : Without One I Wouldn't Have the Other

  • 15 years ago

    by sweet escape

    Weird but good.
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  • 15 years ago

    by Blissful

    I loved how this fit so nicely with each other. The flow was great and each word was full of meaning and strength. Well done it was a nice read. *5/5*

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Wow... very unique... word choice is great... each word has a meaning and makes an impact.. great write..

  • 15 years ago

    by Strange and Beautiful

    Hey D,
    This was a very unique short poem.
    I loved it. Although, I think you should and more and add a little more detail.
    Other than that!
    Great!!!!!
    Love ya! :)

    -jazzy