Very well written...and again so true what you say...its so hard to trust someone who all they do is tell the world what you want to keep to yourself. I mean there are things, that the world doesnt need to know...Very great poem, keep it up!

Why can't you just make that thought like a fish and swim?
^That line just made me giggle hehehe

The poem as a whole was one I could relate with which made it easier for me to read. Great descriptions of emotions my dear. Well done.

Honestly its a cute poem, but i really didnt like the questionsy form, but i liked what it said...good job hun!
Aly

Well written.. u hav a unique way of expressing urself in a poem... very well done! =D
i like the question form.. i do that too.. hehe

Amazing poem. Could feel mixed emotions of anger, love, dissapointment, a bit of sadness. I really loved that.
Also, I loved how strongly your character was in the poem, and the way you put your name in it, made it even stronger.
I got a feeling your friend was jelouse, but I'm not a person to judge and don't know the whole package.
Easy to relate to!
I found it brilliant, 5/5

Another good piece from you...
so much emotion is hidden beneath those lines... Sadness ,anger and desperation ... all these feelings are visible in your poem..

great one..
keep writing..

I really like this one:)
I thought the flow of it was really good.
I know what you mean to.
good job :)
And thanks for commenting on my poem "stunning" a while ago,im sorry it took so long to return the favor.