Comments : Answer to her cries ((Collab with Julia))

  • 16 years ago

    by J u l e s

    I love your dedication loves i really do. most people dont have that friend to pull them away from things like cutting , drinking , drugs but the ones who do are lucky and should be greatful for it. but yes this should most go to the ones who need the help and just really feel hopeless.

    [[[ i am glad we wrote a poem together loves]]]

  • 16 years ago

    by Dawn Ariscent

    Perhaps I shouldn't say this, but my boyfriend cuts, or use to. This poem kind of makes me think about it a little more and understand a little better. Kudos to the authors.

  • 16 years ago

    by RB

    Wonderful poem. i love the two different perspectives shown. really helped me understand both sides of the story. 5/5!

    i also like how u dedicated this piece. keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mike Martin

    I wish i could put the words I know are in my heart, but i cant...all I can say is..."Simply amazing". But hten again, i know who wrote it.....they are always amazing....5/5.......xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by Levi

    I really liked this poem it wasn't just one sided it was coming from both points of view.. which are normally seen during this kind of stuff... cause it's hard to help someone who won't let you help and also to see someone you care about do this to them self sucks too..

    All in all very good write..

    should check out some of my poems..

    Why Suicide?
    and
    Sticks and Stones
    are my 2 stand-out ones

    peace

  • 15 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    Beautiful...

  • 15 years ago

    by Allisha

    This is an awesome poem.
    I really like it.
    I've felt that way before, so I can relate.

  • 15 years ago

    by XxBAYBiiGiRLxX

    Thats is an awesome poem!!
    well written!!
    xoxo

  • 15 years ago

    by Savannah

    I really like this poem.
    I feel the same way.
    And I wish I had that someone.

  • 15 years ago

    by Rosindee

    WOW!!!!
    that was amanzing!!!! It touched me in that special spot!!!! I love it!!!! I can relate in such a way its like you wrote it for me!!!!!
    Its really good!!!!!
    keep up the good work!!

  • 15 years ago

    by linkhorizon

    Thank you for writing a poem so inspiring. somehow i feel less pain in this world knowing i'm not alone. i like to read your poem whenever i'm feeling sad and useless. it always helps me get through the day. keep up the great work.