Comments : A land made of candy

  • 9 years ago

    by Love vs Fate

    Cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuteeeeeee poem! XD me vote 5/5 cute cute cute adorable!

  • 9 years ago

    by heidi

    Good job :)

    kids will sure get a kick outa it. :)

    x

  • 9 years ago

    by heidi

    Good job :)

    kids will sure get a kick outa it. :)

    x

  • 9 years ago

    by heidi

    Good job :)

    kids will sure get a kick outa it. :)

    x

  • 9 years ago

    by Bernice

    OMG!this poem made me laugh,cry;of happiness,and got me angry;because it isnt real.lol.I love your imagination!I wouldve obviousely never thought of that.Right on!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Grace

    Hahahaha i would LOVE to live there!!! but then i would get really fat!! LOL i give ya a 5/5!!

  • 9 years ago

    by ReinaLuvzYoo

    U gotta hell good imagination if only if only!!!! its a lil short though and i must agree wid hoo eva wrote it isnt very powerful u should try write another version of that poem...one a bit longer and maybe sophisticated it would be really gud i bet ya!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by XxFailedxForgottonxX

    Lol thats really cute =]

  • O CHES THIS POEM ROCKS...NOT ONLY CUZ I LOVE CANDY BUT CUZ IT RYMES

  • Dat is sooo cute n funny... like it!!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by TakeMeAsIAm

    Haha nicee!!! i wish it was reall!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    Hee hee hee hee hee!!!!!! that was F.U.N.N.Y.!!!!! i loved it!!!! kool-ei-ooo!!!! WOW!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by adriaan

    Oh come on...that could have been a lot better. That's not a world full of candy, that's just a small theme park. Not bad anyway. :)

  • 9 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    This is cool like i said befor I like the
    way you put things It like you see the world
    in a diffent way

  • 9 years ago

    by linkhorizon

    Lol this so very much reminds me of a poem i wrote describing scenery as candy. i wish you had extended it a bit more. next time i want to see something bigger than willy wonka's chocolate factory lol this definitely gave me the urge to run to the store and get some munchies. :)

    nice use of color scheme and metaphor. cute write. love and peace.

  • 9 years ago

    by heartless

    It is really really good and it makes me want candy alot

  • 8 years ago

    by Tsukuyomi

    Hehe im drooling.