-blinks- o.o

you wrote that?...
like seriously...??
damn.
uhh... I didn't know you had that in ya! xDD
that was really good Gouge...
high five!!

Amazing

This has a structure and scheme that says to me "This is a song". I wonder if perhaps that was what you had in mind. It's got a nice pace to it: simple and effective.

Love ur poem:))