Until The Day I Die

by Coffee Loves Nachos   Apr 24, 2008


Until the day I die,
I will spill my heart for you.
Until the day I die,
we will be friends.
Until the day I die,
I will always help you,
help you with all your problems.
Until the day I die,
will make the same mistakes.
Until the day I die,
we will never fight.
Until the day I die,
we will be the brothers
everyone knows.
Until the day I die,
Travis I will protect you as,
as if you were my real brother.
Until the day I die,
I will be your brother till the end.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Lover Boii

    I really liked it, the rhyme scheme was great.

  • 9 years ago

    by Darien

    Your first two lines sounded as though it came right from the lyrics of a band called Story of the Year. The song has the same title as your poem. I'm not suggesting you plagiarized, but I would recommend changing it.

    It's a good poem. Bonds are hard to keep, but we should always try hard to keep it strong.

  • 9 years ago

    by Love vs Fate

    Bro this poem just brought a tear to my eye. This poem is going on my favorites for one and for two...You are amazing. I love you like a brother. And I will do anything to be there for you and protect you. I hope I get to meet you in rl. Your so awesome bro, Keep writing poems and never stop. 5/5!!