Beautiful poem, it unreavled like a true story. amazing work, truely i usually enjoy readin poems with rythme, becuase they usually tend to flow better, but your poems always seam to flow beautifullly together, even without the rthmyes. it makes this poem unquie and very well wirtten, keep up the great job------tara

Such a sad touching poem... I loved it. The way you expressed your love & feeling towards your father are great..

5/5 excellent poem keep up the good work well done

Very well written, keep it up hun.