Comments : Sweetness, Do You Know?

  • 15 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    I love the start!
    you have a very unique writing style its nice
    it sets you apart and makes you unique

    maybe you could say how nothing could rip you apart and you know this will withstand the test of time

    idk just a suggestion lol
    5/5 <33

  • 15 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    Tehee, why thank ya very muches! =)
    I'll see what I can do. (;

  • 15 years ago

    by Lisa

    Very nice poem and I think it's long enough...good work 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    That was really nice... keep writing,

    Best wishz... Karan

  • 15 years ago

    by Sora

    A great poem. i dont think you need ot add anything on to it, i like it the way it is. it was lovely and worded very wisely.

    And through the chaotic noises of our lives,
    Our hearts will continuously harmonize

    those lines were my favorite. i loved them. very powerful to me. very detailed. job well well done. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 14 years ago

    by katie

    Great poem! I think its fine the way it is. Loved the whole thing! 5/5