Comments : Letting Go To Hold On

  • 15 years ago

    by XxBAYBiiGiRLxX

    Aww I felt all the emotion well written!
    xo
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Overrated

    Thanks for the feedback. glad you enjoyed it. after editing to make it read smoother, i thought it might have took away some of emotion felt. thanks for reading.

  • 15 years ago

    by juliet

    Wow I love the words you used i could really relate and it seemed like it was really came rfom your heart, lots of emotion whether this is really how you feel or not..this is deffinatly goin into my favorites! =)

  • 15 years ago

    by Biya

    If my heart didn't cry
    there'd be no blood in my veins
    fueling this vessel
    storing all of my pain

    so lovely poem , its philosophical poem , i loved it ,

    5/5
    Biya

  • 15 years ago

    by Overrated

    Thank you, and i thought i was past these feelings but today i was wrong. about to write a new 1

  • 15 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This was quite good i loved the title actually really good work xx

  • 15 years ago

    by Overrated

    Thank you princess, im happy to have pleased you ;)

  • 15 years ago

    by XAlwaysXBrokenX

    I liked this poem!! i felt the emotion in it!!! very good

  • 15 years ago

    by jane

    Very emotional i like it

  • 15 years ago

    by she

    The title is awsome, the poem is great

  • 15 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Hey matey that was fantasticly well written.
    thank you so much 4 commenting on my poems :) i don't know how you found me! haha... but thank you :)

    I say keep up the writing hun.
    ruthie

  • 15 years ago

    by shivali

    Its beautifully written........

    full of emotions..

    good job!!!!!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Brittany Michelle

    LOVE IT <3

  • 8 years ago

    by dasheemaebear

    " swallowing my misery
    of words unspoke
    I'm lying to you
    each and every day
    with tears i cant cry
    and every smile i fake"

    i really like this part ... a poem that says every unspoken words

  • 8 years ago

    by Overrated

    A few people have posted my poem on other websites as their own work and changed the title. ðŸ˜"