Comments : Your beautiful words

  • 9 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    So keep spinning me these tails
    of girls more beautiful than I
    and I swear to you and God
    I won't ever let you see me cry

    woah

  • 9 years ago

    by Mike Martin

    These are words to live by...."i wont ever ler you see me cry"....WOW.....thats all i can really say...it's great, as always...5/5.....xoxoxo

  • 9 years ago

    by BurriedFaceDown

    It's been awhile since gabbys written a love poem. I like it

  • 9 years ago

    by Overrated

    Makes my eyes open wide. but with the lack of tears i cant cry. i really enjoyed this poem.

  • 9 years ago

    by Laura

    I look you square in the eyes
    and it's plain across your face
    when you laugh and say "gorgeous"
    my heart begins to race

    love it, i really do, keep up the good work!
    I also think thay many girls can find themselves in this poem!

  • 9 years ago

    by Allisha

    I love it!

  • 9 years ago

    by Allisha

    I love it!

  • 9 years ago

    by Mandy Grace

    Hey i love your poetry especially this one hun! it is amazingly written and a distinct pic comes to mind! beautiful poem!

    mandy :)

  • 9 years ago

    by toni rossetti

    Your poam makes me think, stop talking about past men good or bad to someone you say you love know, i hope i've learn from this great poam, words are powerful, think befor you speek, keep up the good work, i've learn something from you.. (toni)

  • 9 years ago

    by dante

    .....now thats skill... thats all i can say, skill....

  • 9 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    There is no shame in the tears from a poets heart. They wash away the pain and make way for another current that love can ride into that same heart. I liked your release of emotion and the words you chose. peace