Comments : Sonnet on Love !

  • 15 years ago

    by Andrew

    Short and to the point. I totally agree with this poem, love is not just kissing or sex, its so much more than most of us think. Good work keep it up.

  • 15 years ago

    by C P Sharma

    Your poem is in consonance with the rhythm of the heart and it leaves a deep and lasting impression. I have tried to develop the same theme further in the following sonnet that I dedicate to you:

    Love is not a kiss or sex,
    Love is not a muscle flex;
    It is just a heart's reflex,
    Distrust always love annex.

    Don't tax too much your love,
    Don't make it a greedy dove;
    Love's nest is treasure trove,
    Love's integrity is all above.

    Love is not a craze for car
    It's steadfast as pole-star;
    Love doves are never at war,
    Real love is never bizarre.

    Don't make your love complex,
    When in love you never vex.

  • 15 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Truly said... thanks for sharing sum true thoughts thru this wonderful SONNET...that lot of folks still misunderstand love for... U have said in so little words so much... u have showed d meaning of true love...

    Great sonnet BIYA, keep it up...

    Best wishz..
    karan

  • 15 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Truly said... thanks for sharing sum true thoughts thru this wonderful SONNET...that lot of folks still misunderstand love for... U have said in so little words so much... u have showed d meaning of true love...

    Great sonnet BIYA, keep it up...

    Best wishz..
    karan

  • 15 years ago

    by Shelby Baxter

    Oh i love this!!! its great!!!!!
    5/5
    ~shelby*dawn

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    What a beautifull poem , bravo , bravo , nothign more i can say , very nice said ,
    very nice said

  • 15 years ago

    by Jo

    This is good and so true...if only certain ppl actually believed that

  • 15 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    "Love is not kiss or sex
    Love is really something else"

    Perfect start, So true, such honesty such innocence I love it.

    "Be sure whether you lust or love
    As Love is as spiritual as dove"

    Again so true, I love your honesty. And I like how you keep up with a rhyme scheme its very good.

    "Love is not kiss or sex
    Love is really something else"

    I like your repetition here, its at the start and at the middle. I like the fact that your reminding readers which is good. Great consistency.

    "Love is not kiss or sex
    Love is really something else

    Being in love you remain no more egoistic
    While bearing every pain you feel elastic

    Love is not mere kiss or sex
    Love is indeed something else "

    I like how your repeating it again, It was just the right amount. And your innocence in this was very good. It was sweet and I loved reading this. It was an amazing poem. Keep it up! You should check out some of my poetry sometime :D

  • 14 years ago

    by Biya

    Walekum asalam ! and Yes ..Thank you ..
    Peace

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Awww amazing and wonderfully written and very truthfully said an done,,,you have penned the emotions and your message very strong and well in this fantastic poem,,,you seem to me a great poet and I am very delighted to read this poem it has touched my heart so well,,thank u thank u thank you I love love love loved this poem
    Just magnificent and splendid job well done :D 10/10