This is NOT shitty...it's really good. Touching..in it's obvious own dark ways.5/5

Its REALLY not shitty, I really like it, its better than anything I could write! Keep your head up hun and keep writing, you are very talented. 5/5

This isn't shitty by any means.
and exactly how I feel.
i love it.
5/5

Yah, i agree with what is said above.. it's a very touching & wonderful poem.. keep it up 5/5

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