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by Nobodys Hero Apr 30, 2008
Dark, fantasy /
Ice shards snaking through her veins
A void that cradles her heart
How do I cure this unloved demon,
From tearing herself apart
Startled by her Orbs of Grey
So empty, devoid of life
Reaching out toward her heart
To snatch that blood soaked knife
Dead eyes of shattered crystal
Scream silently for hopeful dreams
Forever devoid of emotion
Does nobody hear her screams?
Crimson blood pours from my hands
I try in vein to reach her soul
Crying desperately to help her out
To make this demon whole
Darkness pours from a twisted heart
Can nobody see her tears?
Wishing forever to hold her close
To take away her fears
Copyright Ã‚Â© June 2008
I've read a few of your pieces and you're an amazing writer i'll say hah. I love this poem a lot and the others just as well (:
by loving my kids tessa and savannah
I like how you express your self in all kinds of way you are doing a good job hope you keep it up and do some more poems about life
by Bradley Peter
Not quite as powerful as your other pieces I've read, but still a wonderful piece. Your wording astounds me. I love it, as well as the way they are stuctured. Brilliant!
Wow, this is really well written. I'm not a big fan of dark poetry but from what I've read this is really good. You're very descriptive, but you also leave plenty to the imagination, not completely spelling it out. Great job
Wow this poem is beautiful...it flows so nicely...and it's so different from what im used of reading....you did an amazing job!!!...very unique<3...5/5 for sure:)
p.s- thanks for the kind comment you left on my poem:)