This poem is very deep and emotional. A lot of anger in it as well, but I love how the poem flows from one word to the next

This poem iz very emotional and sad u must of have put a lot of time into this

Strong emotions, good poem well done xxx

Brilliant poem I voted this poem into the contest. hope ya don't mind

This piece is so powerful and real....

great use of strong emotions and it runs so well!!

Love it

xoxo

I like the idea for this poem. Its a good topic and you do handle it in a good way. Deep and emotionel just as stated above...

Very good :)
Very good way of showing emotions and good flow
good job,keep writing (:

I love this poem it has an exstrem meaing...your rite...our poerty relates alot